Initial Proposal

The initial proposal of my short film idea was that there would be a complicated love triangle between two girls and one boy. The setting would be in a school so clear comparisons could be clearly made between the girls for binary opposition eg: the shy one would wear a traditional, smart uniform whearas the other would be the opposite and defy the school rules by untucking the skirt and making her skirt shorter etc. This would already make the audience prefer the less confident girl. When a girl decides to tell her mate the secret she likes him, the more confident one says it first therefore the shyer one decides to hide her true feelings for the sake of not upsetting her friend.
The next scene is at a party (a bit like a scene from Skins) where it's teenagers showing to be out of control eg: drinking and smoking. The quieter girl chooses to tell the boy her feelings and her other friend overhears and an argument breaks out between the two oppositions and there ends up being a competition in between for his affections. There ends being a tragic event occuring.